Dr. Laura Vorachek
My process began by brainstorming ideas for the essay, and how to conduct my own original research so that it would be an asset to my essay. Once I decided on the topic of adding warning labels to women's fashion magazines, I concluded that a survey of my female peers at the University of Dayton would provide me with the best information to support my ideas. I was able to incorporate my original research into my essay and improve my essay by writing three drafts and receiving feedback from my classmates and teacher.
Amodio, Alexandra G.
"Warning: Models in Magazines Are Larger Than They Appear,"
Line by Line: A Journal of Beginning Student Writing: Vol. 1
, Article 6.
Available at: http://ecommons.udayton.edu/lxl/vol1/iss1/6