Before I began writing the first draft I watched the Classic Tootsie Pop commercial multiple times and determined how the commercial effectively allured to the audience of both parents and their children. While I wrote my first draft, I continued to play the commercial and reminded myself of the lasting impact of this 1970s commercial as my classmates in elementary school conducted this licking experiment. After my first draft, I received feedback from a classmate and my professor. I took some of their advice, edited my paper, and turned it in.
"Tootsie Pop: Memorable Childhood Candy Commercial,"
Line by Line: A Journal of Beginning Student Writing: Vol. 7
, Article 8.
Available at: https://ecommons.udayton.edu/lxl/vol7/iss1/8