Dr. Sooyoung Chung
My purpose in writing this Summary and Response paper was to take a deep look at Norris’ essay, The Secret Ingredient, and focus on a main aspect that I found to be important to me. I am trying to show, using Norris’ essay as evidence, that I agree with Norris’ assertion that people are too materialistic today and that people should be focuses on love instead. The hardest challenge for me when I was working on this paper was trying to balance between using textual evidence and using my own words. I wanted to make sure that I provided enough evidence to support my claim but I also wanted to make sure that I incorporate my own ideas into the paper. When I was able to find a balance between these two aspects, I was able to fully create a rough draft of my paper. I created three rough drafts that were looked over by peers and then a final draft that my professor graded. I revised my paper based on my peers’ evaluations as well as the feedback that my professor gave me on my final draft.
Coury, Blake R.
"Love vs. Capitalism,"
Line by Line: A Journal of Beginning Student Writing: Vol. 2
, Article 3.
Available at: http://ecommons.udayton.edu/lxl/vol2/iss1/3